This was an emotional assignment ;); It was a hard process, but empowering at the same time.
here it is (note, I opted to not add background music; I felt it took away from my words):
Your digital story made me think of my own mother and how much I love her.
One think you might think about changing would be adding music... I think the right kind of music, very low, during some moments could give it more emotional impact.
The best thing about your digital story is when you talk about not getting over losing your mother, but learning that you can still enjoy your life and miss someone.
Your story made me think of my father. He passed away before my wife and I got married. I can relate to the passing of a parent, you never forget them. You did a good job with the narration and the pictures were timed with the narration.
Your digital story made me think about.....your strength as a child and young adult.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....maybe including some music for just the very beginning and ending images.
The best thing about your digital story is.....I like your quote at the beginning and how it speaks for your entire story!
You digital story made me think about what my students may be going through that I am unaware of.
ReplyDeleteOne think you might think about trying is music. I think that you have a powerful story, but music may give it more power.
The best thing about your digital story is your tone of voice. You have a nice speaking voice.
Nice job!
Your digital story made me think of my own mother and how much I love her.
ReplyDeleteOne think you might think about changing would be adding music... I think the right kind of music, very low, during some moments could give it more emotional impact.
The best thing about your digital story is when you talk about not getting over losing your mother, but learning that you can still enjoy your life and miss someone.
Your digital story made me think about.....How grateful I am for my Mom, and as stated, what some of my students may be going through.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....adding music at the beginning.
The best thing about your digital story is.....you made it very personal and emotional.
Your story made me think of my father. He passed away before my wife and I got married. I can relate to the passing of a parent, you never forget them. You did a good job with the narration and the pictures were timed with the narration.
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